Time Of Your Life by “Tara Gilesbie” commentary Chapter 24

Chapter 24…this chapter is incredibly dull

AN: stup flaminigngggg u prepzzzzzzz gawd btw sorry i ddint update yesterday i waz havin a really bad day

Aww, you poor thing. /end sarcasm

we went 2 da concert. eveancesne played dey sounded amazing.

den we got oon. we started wit a cover of so alone by ana blue.

“ma face against da window pane

Shut up

a teer 4 every drop of rain

Shut up

I AM SO LONLY ND SO SAD

UR THE REASON IM FEELIN BAD

I AM SO LONELY ND SO SAD

LIVIN IN A DREEMM I NEVER HAD” i sang

but den… SUM PPL APPEARED N DA STAGE!1!11! IT WAZ… ORHGOCHEIMAROO!1!1!111

I swear to God this sentence appears in EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER

“OFNG NOOOOOO” saukra shooted angirly

That actually seems like something she would do

“GTFOOOOO” i shoted

“cum [Teehee] wit me nd halp me wkith my expereemints!111!1!”

You would have thought he would have given up being kind about it by now and would have just taken her.

rorochimaruo yelled

The spelling makes me want to cry

“shell never do dat!1!11” anita nd naruito yled

“will u prmize nt 2 hurt ma friends?” i axed

“ok”

HE LIED

“den ill do it sorry guyz but im puting u in danger if i dunt” i saed sadly

What, you’ve only just decided this NOW?

narrutio burst into tearz OF JOY :D ”im going 2 miss u!1!11! annd he mite do bad tings 2 u”

“i can deaal wit it da stuff ma parents torturerz did 2 me waz worse but i survived i said

 Wait a second. The speech marks don’t end… *OCD/Grammar Nazi senses are tingling*

“dunt do dis eevony” saukrkrut sadi

Saukrkrut sounds like a German Sayian name

“i hav 2” i sobbed den stepped in2 orochimmaru’z car sexly

So, even when you’re about to be taken away and experimented on, you walk into a car sexly…wait A CAR?! WTF?!

“good choice” he saiddd

“dunt get any ideaz” i said back

Yeah because that will work

“ok” he said “juzt halp me wit my experremints and ill b happy”

I want some mints now…

“ok when cn i go hme”

Are you serious?

“NEVER” HE LAUGhed evilllly

“OMFG NOOOOOOOO” i shooted

You actually thought he’d let you…? You’ve never actually watched this show have you?